Friday, March 18, 2011

JOURNAL ENTRY

Complete the journal entry in about 40-50 words.Assume yourself in the situation.

TRAPPED IN THE UNDERGROUND

Suddenly all the lights on that crowded underground train went out. Then it stopped in that dark tunnel.
We waited. We expected the lights to come on again soon. But nothing happened. Then I began to smell something. Yes, I could smell smoke. So I asked myself, "Is this train on fire?" People around me then began to cry out in fear. "The train is on fire!" they cried.
Then the woman standing next to me suddenly fell on the floor. I realised she was overcome by the smoke. Then I saw flames appearing. "If something does not happen soon," I said to myself, "I will be burnt alive!"
But as I stood there in the dark in that crowded burning train, I could see no way to escape. I thought, "No-one can save me from certain death but God. Only God can make a way for any of us to escape death in this train."
So I cried, "God, if it is not my time to die, please help me!" Now as I spoke to God in this way, something happened and I was saved ………..

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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 12:48 AM

    that in the tunnel the fire was extinguished.not only me but the people of the tunnel were also saved by my beseech.Then i thanked to my god for saving us and we all went out and we then went an other subway train...


    Abbas
    VII-M

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  2. Messi Michael Ramis is Cricket Master BlasterMarch 21, 2011 at 12:57 AM

    i was saved by a person who was bleeding very much because so i asked him who is he he told me that i was saved by im when he first threw all my stuff out of the train and then he jumped with me in the grass and then we went to find all our stuff and then i found my all the stuff.
    Messi Ramis
    7-m

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  3. Areesha Ajaz, Fatima Asim , Filza Aslam & Zara KamranMarch 21, 2011 at 12:58 AM

    Something happened! I stood up and I saw a boy saving everyone,I was astonished that a boy aged 19 , was saving everyone.Suddenly he came to me saying to hold his hand,without any fear i held his hand tightly and he took me out of the train. For a second i thought that God had send an angel to safe my life...
    Areesha,Bisma,Fatima,Nabeel,Emad,Aleem and Adam

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  4. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    i was saved by a recsue team and taken to the hospital with other people suffering with injuries.after i realized that my sister vwas left there.instead of caring about my life i took her from there and we saved.

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  5. Demi Lovato IMCMarch 21, 2011 at 1:06 AM

    When I Tried to understand what had happened i saw that somehow the water was entering in the train and the fire was extincted . After this event every thing become normal . this all was gift of the god that we were saved from the horrible disaster then i thanked to the god.

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  6. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 1:06 AM

    that in the tunnel the fire was extinguished.not only me but the people of the tunnel were also saved by my beseech.Then i thanked to my god for saving us and we all went out and we then went an other subway train...

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  7. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 1:08 AM

    Hammaz: I ran out of the train and realized that there was no way out. I called my parents but they were'nt picking up the phone.Then i heard a big sound of rescue truck.I was so happy that i'm gonna be saved.The recuers took me to the hospitals and i was sufering with many injuries.After one week i was sent back to my home.

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  8. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 1:11 AM

    LAiba: The train fire was increasing from minute to minute and i was getting worried that would i be able to get out? The rescuers arrived and took the remaaining people to the hospital and after three hours this news was appeared on the newspaper.

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  9. shaheera raghibMarch 21, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    and i thank god that he save me and i was so happy but some persons are badly injured and few peoples lost there life and the train tunnel is burn because of the fire and after wards the fire brigade was came and they put of the fire and then i call my parents and say them this things and after wards my parents come fast and take me to my me to house and i thanks god for this.

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  10. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    Aisha: A man with blue eyes and a cowboy hat came running with his team to save me.They took a large pile of fire extinguishers with them and used them to extinguish the fire.After the fire was gone, i was took to the hospital and my life was saved.I was so happy .

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  11. filza aslamMarch 21, 2011 at 3:44 AM

    hmmm..... after i realized our train was burning i panicked . the rest of the time was chaos as every had started to run here and there . obviously they were in shock but a man had taken control of the situation and exclaimed "if we want to get out of here we will have to work toghather" and every one agreed . so i along with the othrs broke the flaming doors of the train and swarmed out.as iand the other passangers reached to the end of the tunnel i quickly called the rescue centre for help.I and the others were saved and i thanked god. :D

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  12. Aisha nisarMarch 21, 2011 at 5:52 AM

    A man with blue eyes and wearing a cowboy hat came running with his team holding a large pile of fire extinguishers. Then i realized that it was a rescue team who had came to save us.They extinguished the fire and took out the remaining people from the burning train.I was saved and after,I was taken to a hospital.

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  13. MUSKAN RAFIQMarch 25, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    ....and then i saw back,their was a man standing behind me with white clothes and blue eyes and then he said me my duty was to save you and their people and i had finished it and then i was about to say thank you to that person but he got vanished i felt nervous that what happened?,then i thanks to god and then i call an ambulance and we all people went to hospital for our medical treatment.

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